From 991d57d5aa275a7c855ccf9ceabd8c1370253d2d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aaron LI Date: Wed, 9 Jan 2019 20:37:16 +0800 Subject: Improve the description in README --- README | 20 ++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/README b/README index d40e0ed..7d145cc 100644 --- a/README +++ b/README @@ -7,21 +7,17 @@ MIT License https://github.com/liweitianux/dfly-update -A simple tool to update a DragonFly BSD system using binary releases or -snapshot builds. - -Tests, issue reports, and pull requests welcome :) +A simple tool to update a DragonFly BSD system using a binary release or +snapshot image file. Introduction ------------ -The officially supported method to update a DragonFly system is building -and installing from sources. However, it's time-consuming, hard or even -impossible to build sources on a small or low-end VPS, and it's also not -easy to transfer the built "/usr/obj" (which is rather big) to a remote -VPS for an update. - -Therefore, a simple tool to update a DragonFly BSD system directly from -the officially built release or snapshot images is very useful and +The officially supported method to update a DragonFly BSD system is +building and installing from the source. However, on a low-end machine +(e.g., a small VPS), it's time-consuming and hard to build the source. On +the other hand, it's not easy to transfer the built "/usr/obj" (quite big) +to a remote VPS for an update. Therefore, a simple tool to update a the +system directly using a binary release or snapshot image is very useful and necessary. This tool refers to the installation procedures and the official source -- cgit v1.2.2