Resumes: Minor improvements and proofreading

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 % Summary & Objectives
 %======================================================================
 Highly-motivated PhD candidate in Physics with good foundations of math
-and statistics, and familiar with the basics of machine learning as well
-as signal and image processing.
+and statistics, and familiar with the basics of data analysis, machine
+learning, as well as signal and image processing.
 Enthusiastic about computer technologies with 10 years experience
 in Linux and BSD, and involved in several open source projects (e.g.,
 DragonFly BSD).
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
   \comptence{Data Analysis}%
     {R, pandas, scikit-learn; matplotlib, ggplot2; SQL (basic knowledge)}
   \comptence{Tools}%
-    {Regular expression; Jupyter Notebook; SSH, Git, Make; Ansible}
+    {Regular expression; Jupyter notebook; SSH, Git, Make; Ansible}
   \comptence{Web Development}%
     {Django, Tornado; jQuery, Bootstrap; JavaScript, HTML5}
   \comptence{Typesetting}%
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
     {Physics}%
     {PhD (candidate; expected to graduate in early 2019)}
 
-  \separator{0.7em}
+  \separator{0.5em}
   \education%
     {September 2009}%
     [June 2013]%
@@ -128,18 +128,19 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
       \item Developed the low-frequency radio sky simulation software:
         \link{https://github.com/liweitianux/fg21sim}{\texttt{FG21sim}}.
       \item Significantly improved the modeling of radio halos,
-        and integrated the instrumental effects of radio interferometers.
-      \item Quantitatively evaluated the impacts of radio halos on
-        reionization signal detection, and finished the journal paper.
-      \item Collaborated in classifying the radio galaxies by morphologies
-        using a deep convolutional neutral network.
+        and integrated the instrumental effects of radio interferometers
+        into the simulation pipeline.
+      \item Quantitatively evaluated the impacts of radio halos on the
+        detection of reionization signals, and finished the journal paper.
+      \item Collaborated in classifying the radio galaxies according to
+        the morphologies using a deep Convolutional Neutral Network (CNN).
       \item Used algorithms such as wavelet to denoise and enhance X-ray
         astronomical images.
       \item Extracted both the spatial and spectral information of X-ray
-        images, and used the support vector machine (SVM) to identify the
+        images, and used the Support Vector Machine (SVM) to identify the
         potential point sources.
     \end{itemize}}%
-    [Machine learning, CNN, SVM, Image processing, Python]
+    [Python, Machine learning, CNN, SVM, Image processing]
 
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   \project
@@ -173,8 +174,12 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
     {Attended \enquote{The 2$^{\rm nd}$ China-Australia SKA Big Data Workshop.}}%
     [\begin{itemize}
       \item Implemented the data transmission functionality between the
-        NGAS data storage system and the DALiuGE data processing system.
-      \item Learned team collaboration and agile development methods.
+        \link{https://github.com/ICRAR/ngas}{\texttt{NGAS}}
+        data storage system and the
+        \link{https://github.com/ICRAR/daliuge}{\texttt{DALiuGE}}
+        data processing system.
+      \item Gained team collaboration experience and
+        learned agile development methods.
     \end{itemize}]%
     [Data transmission, Data storage, Agile development, Python]
 
@@ -208,7 +213,7 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
   \experience
     {September 2017}%
     {Involved in writing the
-      \enquote{Large-scale Diffuse Foreground Sources} section in
+      \enquote{Large-scale Diffuse Foreground Sources} section for
       \enquote{The Chinese SKA Science White Book.}}
 
   \separator{0.5em}
@@ -260,11 +265,11 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
         to locate the most likely Single-Nucleotide Polymorphisms (SNPs)
         associated with a trait or disease.
       \item Used the R programming language to perform Logistic regressions
-        and hypothesis testings between the SNP codes and traits, and
+        and hypothesis testings between SNPs and traits, and
         identified the most possible SNPs and genes that may cause the
         disease.
     \end{itemize}]%
-    [R, Regression analysis, Hypothesis testing]
+    [R, Data cleaning, Regression analysis, Hypothesis testing]
 
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   \experience
@@ -284,7 +289,7 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
   \experience
     [July 2013]%
     {September 2013}%
-    {Summer intern @ 97 Suifang}%
+    {Summer intern @ 97 Suifang (startup company)}%
     [\begin{itemize}
       \item Developed the website to help patients with \textit{hepatitis B}
         track various indicators in their analysis reports.
@@ -363,6 +368,8 @@ that I can grow with as I achieve company goals.
   \entry{September 2016}%
     {Participation Award,
       The 13$^{\rm th}$ China Post-Graduate Mathematical Contest in Modeling}
+  \entry{July 2014}%
+    {Outstanding Teaching Assistant, College Physics}
   \entry{November 2013}%
     {Outstanding PhD Student Entrance Scholarship of Shanghai Jiao Tong University}
   \entry{October 2012}%